Ch 2, pg 12

August 19th, 2011, 8:00 pm

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rainysidewalks, August 19th, 2011, 3:10 pm

shwoooo! so, as you might have noticed, the old page 12 is gone and now this page is here.

thanks to @Asj 's comment, I realized the transition to "several years later" in the story was too abrupt and confusing the way I was doing it and decided to add in a page in between the previous pages 11 and 12.

so, next week, the old page 12 will be back up in its rightful place after this one as the new page 13 (with some added text) plus page 14 (totally new). xD

for now, enjoy some chibi kids! one of them is ameko.
the other two are tomoyo and tomosuke (anybody remember them from farewell feeling ver. 2? they're baaack)

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Asj, August 19th, 2011, 9:58 pm

I thought it sounded like years had passed, but I didn't know what had made Surprise sleep by the door. But I think this page helps explain stuff, and there's chibis. (but I'm still curious about why Surprise will be at the door - is it because Surprise is starting to really worry about them taking her away?)

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rainysidewalks, August 26th, 2011, 12:51 pm

@Asj: it's because he misses grief :P

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