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February 25th, 2011, 8:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
not a timeskip

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rainysidewalks, February 25th, 2011, 2:43 pm

タイムスキップ?! greetings! please go 9 pages back to the page titled "version 3 launch" for an explanation of why the storyline suddenly appears to have jumped 40 years back ^^

and for those who already did so...hope you enjoyed these first 9 pages! more to follow next Saturday!

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@Natasha: D: sorry for being depressing right off the bat ^^;
this part with his brother actually *did* occur in the original storyline, it just wasn't really shown.
@Jazeki: yes, definitely ;.;
@Zerix: I'm so glad you like the new opening! I'm always concerned when I do a rewrite that I'll do more harm than good, haha. and you're absolutely right, ellison may be the "protagonist" in that he's the main human in the story, but I've always felt that grief was the real star :)

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Natashakiable18, February 26th, 2011, 12:56 am

Awww! It's sad already! :( His brother died T^T

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Jazeki, February 26th, 2011, 10:18 am

That is really sad. I wonder if Grief ever is disappointed that she was assigned that emotion.

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Asj, February 26th, 2011, 10:58 am

it's no wonder she quits. :/

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Zerix-kun (Guest), February 26th, 2011, 7:24 pm

I love this opening. Of course, it is sad, but the fact that I can say it made me sad makes it a great opening and an effective hook. As I've watched Farewell Feelings develop, I've started to feel like this story is more about Grief than Ellison, though Ellison is the "main" character. It's only proper that it starts off on a depressing note.

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Pinali, March 2nd, 2011, 8:39 am

Nice that you're redoing it to be shiny :)

Here's a tip though, right click your tones layers and click "rasterise" before you save your pages
That will get rid of the white "pixels"/rough edge around the tone areas

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